Sample 1434

Sample 1434

Comments on this peice:

This is a beautiful start but I agree with others that the top is a little too boxy/plain/boring.
~Kisa girl Pick It! 02/24/12 @ 11:07AM
It's a very pretty dress. I love the underlay color. I lace goes really well with the underlay. I think it could use a belt of sash around the waist.
~Cara Pick It! 02/24/12 @ 10:25AM
[it needs] something a little more interesting. I agree that it is a bit pinaforish - perhaps a v or assymetric neck... just something to make it a bit more intresting.
~ModLover Pick It! 02/24/12 @ 10:16AM
This is nice but very very simple. Maybe add some waist definition?
~ModLover Skip It! 02/24/12 @ 07:49AM

Redo #1

• Sash Added
  

from Sample 1335 (llink bottom)

• Neckline less boxy
  
  

(Example dress on Base by ~Daikura)

link bottom


Redo #2

• Added Sleeves

From Back in a Sash Top (link below)

(bottom's NOT suppose to be cut off sorry)

• Deep Neck (maybe tooooo deep lol)
  
  

Redo #3

• Sleeves
  


• AND belt!! (Sample 1355 bottom)
  


• DEEEPE Neck!!!
  
  

On El Chibi

(cited at bottom)

Which do you like best? Want me to change it more? COMMENT BELOW!!!

(Oh and i added fishies at the bottom, click to feed ;)

Sample 1434: http://www.modcloth.com/shop/dresses/sample-1434

Chibi Base: http://daikura.deviantart.com/art/Chibi-Base-187024304

Back in a Sash Top (sleeves): http://www.modcloth.com/shop/blouses/back-in-a-sash-top

Sample 1355 (Sash): http://www.modcloth.com/shop/dresses/sample-1355